My Poem of Death

[Stellar]

When I pass into infinity

My spirit peered down into this world
Time can age with smiles forming crow’s feet
This abode I was born
Now a cynical beat
A place were others lived and died
My spirit sighed
What purpose is my life and like others?
I asked why
Shall I come here to eat than die?
Shall I comfort a soul so they endure another Day?
Will my actions matter anyway?
Oh this marvelous Globe the World
Where do all the questions go?
Who in the sky can answer them all?
Masses of people suffering all at once like a revolving door
The world lets in more
My spirit peered down into this world
Listen to these words and sadness I lament
I’m year closer till death
For what is that worth or meant

[Asuka Langley]

[Jackstar]

When I pass into infinity

I'm fast-forwarding to beyond.

[Silphion]

When I pass into infinity

My spirit peered down into this world
Time can age with smiles forming crow’s feet
This abode I was born
Now a cynical beat
A place were others lived and died
My spirit sighed
What purpose is my life and like others?
I asked why
Shall I come here to eat than die?
Shall I comfort a soul so they endure another Day?
Will my actions matter anyway?
Oh this marvelous Globe the World
Where do all the questions go?
Who in the sky can answer them all?
Masses of people suffering all at once like a revolving door
The world lets in more
My spirit peered down into this world
Listen to these words and sadness I lament
I’m year closer till death
For what is that worth or meant

This is actually a good poem, and I have re-edited it,
I hope with your approval, to my own personal taste.


"My Poem of Destiny

When I pass into the Infinite

My spirit peered into this world
Time's ageless smiles forming feet
For the abode where I was born
Now a cynical beat
A place where others lived and died
My spirit sighed
What purpose is my life like others?
I asked why
Shall I come here, to merely eat and die?
Shall I comfort someone, so they endure another Day?
Will my actions matter anyway?
O this marvelous Globe the World
Where do all the questions go?
Who in the sky can answer them?
Masses suffering all at once
Like a revolving door, the world lets in more
My spirit peered into this world
Listen to these words, the sadness I lament
I am a year yet closer until death
For what that may be worth or meant."

[Dr. MD MD]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CF2ekajIY7M

[Silphion]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CF2ekajIY7M

"Beans, greens and tangerines ..."

I can stomach that.

[Stellar]

This is actually a good poem, and I have re-edited it,
I hope with your approval, to my own personal taste.


"My Poem of Destiny

When I pass into the Infinite

My spirit peered into this world
Time's ageless smiles forming feet
For the abode where I was born
Now a cynical beat
A place where others lived and died
My spirit sighed
What purpose is my life like others?
I asked why
Shall I come here, to merely eat and die?
Shall I comfort someone, so they endure another Day?
Will my actions matter anyway?
O this marvelous Globe the World
Where do all the questions go?
Who in the sky can answer them?
Masses suffering all at once
Like a revolving door, the world lets in more
My spirit peered into this world
Listen to these words, the sadness I lament
I am a year yet closer until death
For what that may be worth or meant."

@Silphion

Nice improvement